by dweaver999
Of course there will be jell-o (jelly to us Brits) in the 45th century! Actually i think i just might stop reading for a couple of minutes to go and make some for tomorrow, but i think i am out of lime.
i am sorry Master Dweaver there are quite a few spelling errors, but still ghave You a five for a wonderful piece of story telling and an amazing sex scene.
A great story. The only thing keeping it from perfection is the occasional spelling mistake (eg: "I rubber his . . ."). A great series; looking forward to the next installment.
Can't wait to read the next chapter. The romantic in me would love to see Susan and her "Master" fall in love, but I know I"ll love whatever direction you take this series in. You have a great writing talent. Wonderful sex scenes.