All Comments on 'Galactic Slave Ch. 09'

Kudos on the creep factor with the bugs. I can't believe that they were betrayed. I hope all works out well in the end. It seems to me that Slave is having feelings for Master. Can't wait to see more.

there were a few typos, missing words - something that I'd not seen before. You are doing very well with this story and I'm looking forward to further chapters. But do all of us a small favor and read the story one last time slowly and look for mistakes. Thanks for past and future enjoyment.

Somehow, this chapter made me feel sad. I think it is because the poor girl is starting to lose her identity and become more of a thing and less of a person.

i am sorry Master Dweaver but i could only give this chapter a four, due to two reasons:-

1. There are quite a few typos.

2. slave's migraine. i know migraine sufferer's experiance different symptoms but if i could not shut my eyes during an attack everything would be going round and round until i vomit. True things seem to be going round with my eyes shut, but by shutting my eyes and hjolding onto the side of the bed/chair etc i can convince myself that all is ok. So i would have expected slave to have been sick or at the very least feeling sick.

As to the rest of the story i love the way You mix mystery and intrigue into BDSM fiction. Now if someone like Agatha Christie had added BDSM to her stories they might have sold a few more!