All Comments on 'Gamble'

A great story. love it. AAAAAA++++++

Was not able to pause the story! It is 3am and I just finished it! Great story, don't stop now!

Thought bev would reveal his incestuous relationship to Karl as a way to ease his mind.

I gave it 5 stars. It is a good read and I hope you would write at least one more chapter. I have some ideas on where I would go with this story but in the end it is up to you to write the story. Well done.

Your spell check needs updated lots of miss spelled words. But also a decent story.

Very nice and very creative. The storyline was believable and easy to follow. Would love to see the story from Cat's perspective or perhaps a sequel told by Cat? Just a thought.

loved it

Great story. It has a perfect ending just like it is.

AWWWsome !!!!! I normally don't give out 5 stars to authors with less than 25 stories, but this story deserved it. Keep up the good work.

Great story, I'd love to see a follow-on that explains Bev Wilder's interest. Maybe something like he is "married" to his sister or wants to be and saw Kurt and Cat as similar or completion of what he had or missed(?)... You're right, lots of room to continue and you did a great job with this story.

excellent story.

I liked your characters. I thought Bev would reveal a wife, who just happened to be his sister. Would like to read some more.

Not the typical grunt grunt oh yeah baby cum for me how was I story. Felt more like reading a cross between field n Stream and Good House Keeping. I applaud a well written story, characters fleshed out to completion with polish. Employment of the less is more principal engaging a reader with hope and self placement. Thank you for your effort and time. I greatly appreciated the story even if it wasn't filled with the verbose and heated sibling sex I'd hoped for at the onset the writing still resulted in finishing the story with maybe a paragraph or two speed past.

I truly enjoyed your story, it is well written and erotic also. Please keep up the excellent work.

I’m guessing that english isn’t your native language. You are trying to hard, trying to use words that a British author wouldn’t.

Of course a man who shoots rabbits and squirrels would be a good hunting guide in an area he'd never set foot on. And of course his good-for-nothing brother-in-law would win over three hundred and eighty thousand dollars at a casino in a single day. Not very believable. Also not believable that a man could sleep in the same bed with his attractive sister for months without making a move on her. Other than those things your story was okay.

One of the best sories I've read in this category. Yes, I would love to read more of your work.

I find some of the best authors here! You my friend are one of them! Thank you.

An excellent read, thanks for sharing.

Now I want to know why Bev is being so nice?!!! Good story. :-)

Ehhh… so-so.

The chuckhold aspect was unnecessary. Focus on the relationship of the siblings, helping weather the abusiveness of the brother in law, and then finding their common ground to build their relationship.

“You need to make plans….”

To be imagined in Bev’s voice. 😋

5⭐️

Loved your story. A happy ending in a sibling romance is always a great read. Thank you

The story was good, and pretty fun, but the idea that he has $380k on the table but the 3 of them are struggling with bills and then $30k makes it all better is a little out there.

Just so you know, it is illegal to sell wild game and there is little to no money in selling furs…..so your story premise of making extra money by hunting has no (0) credibility.

I don't understand people reading a story that is tagged incest and then complain about the incest. This was a really solid slow burn of a story. The build up to the actual sex is done so much better than the bulk of what I see, "my boob fell out, then my pants fell off, I tripped, he tripped into me, and oh noes we were accidentally fucking but I grew to like it and didn't stop." 95% of the stories are like that it seems. This had plot, premise, and a solid enough environment. I do agree with some feedback that the hunting was sketchy. Would have been fine if you didnt date the story by adding in the vlogging for the gun store.

As if a country boy would care about selling illegal meat. My mom bought raw milk from a farm near my hometown. Farmers don't give a fuck.

Also Bev is interested in them because he's a rich pervert duh. The richer you get the more the world bores you and the more detached you become.

The start was pretty grounded. I like that they went to therapy for once. Could have used more sex scenes preferably without Karl kinda overdid the karl cucking.

Loved the story- nice descriptions and character build up

Would love to read more of your stories

I LIKED IT...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Your arrangement with a casino boss Bev Wilder spoiled the story!

This was a really interesting spin on a story of this type. It was very well done, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Six Stars if I could!

(5/1/2023) Okay, I’m not a country boy and I don’t care whether the selling of wild game was legal or not or if selling furs was not very profitable. This was a very nice fantasy with a good mix of erotica. Thank you, thank you, thank you, for not having Karl eat her out after Kurt came in her kitty. Also, it would have been great to have Karl catch them as Kurt did Cat doggy while pulling her hair as she declared herself as Kurt’s property. Five stars.

You are a true author I love your work looking forward to reading more of your work.

Good story jn general. Enjoyable. Some details felt a little glossed over, and some a little awkward, but on the whole it was a fun story to read. Thank you!