All Comments on 'Game Boy Ch. 02'

I enjoyed reading your ass story. A lot of smells going on.

The young lady who dropped in on our heroes obviously was interested. She should have sat on a chair nearby and fingered herself to climax as they came.

Excellent story. I like how the guy is a freaky gentleman, and I love all the British idioms. I'm not much into...ass smells, but your stories make great reference material for rimming stories because your vocabulary and descriptions are excellent. I look forward to reading more of your works. Definitely on my favorite author list.

This is far but FAR the best story I ever read and I don't even care if it's just fanfiction or actually a true story. This turned me on in a way i cannor describe even if I have no fetishes similar to yoyrs but it was just fucking awesome. Thanks for writing that. Aside, I love how you managed to express yourself and the words use is awesome. I'd love to read more of your works.

Enjoyed the story and laughed out loud over some of the story line, thanks for the chuckle.😎