All Comments on 'Game Night'

by brightestangel03

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

nice concept but proof reading is your friend there are alot of mistakes

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
w(h)ine

Pinot grigio should be drunk young.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good First Story

Keep writing. Your word choice is quite descriptuve. Do take more tyme with prooof reading in the next one. Thankks.

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