All Comments on 'Game of Love Ch. 06'

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josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
Helllooooooooooo

Wowowowow..... Really?????!is this happening???????hahahaha let the game beginnnnnn hohoho

josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
Hahahaha

At the begin i was like what the fuck,did sergio manage to stop Eric from going??? Hell no thats not fair but hahahahah i had forgetten that this is vanalas the king of writers....boy,THE GAME IS ON

😁😁😁😁the fact that Trev and giada were ruling the game probably before Hernandez's arrival was hurting me but it was worth it coz hahaha BOY I HAD TO ENDURE THEM FOR JUST A WHILE SINCE THE KING WAS COMING SOON

josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
Hahahahahahaha

So Trev is engaged to sergio??😆😆😆😆😆😏😏😏😏😏😏hehehehe we shall see if this engagement will happen....first of all he z so ugly,..unpleasant.bad mouthed and stinking

😆😆😆😆😆next,Sergio has second thoughts about the 3weeks time wedding so the bitch to be brief is fucked up hahaha not to mention that Adriannah resents him hahahahahaha,briefly Trevor is fucked up...he will soon be sewerage

josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
Well what happened to Giada???😀😆😆😆😆😆

i mean she should be smiling....she is going to be "in" isnt it???? She wanted to co-hold shares with David but now what happened??? Why z she not smiling????? Hahahahahah not even in her wildest dreams did she expect that....the iron lady is soon gonna be the wooden lady hahahahahahaha plus that burden of a son who can stoop so low to force a man to love him hihihihihihihi😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 indeed they are "A BUNCH" OF LOSERS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..I FEEL SO VICTORIOUS..And unfortunately,Eric has no Amnesia so they are at his mercy....lets go bwoyo

josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
Damn...

Our baby man sergio has suffered alot from guilt but its worth it...let him be,i love him but he has to taste his own medicine so hehehehehe we have to torture him and basing on the way he looks at the phone's pic and how he has taken in Eric's appearance,.. He is so into us and so horny....yap soon we will be fucking him like maniacs,riding that dick as it pulses thru our hot body..so If i was Trevor,i wud be down right there.We have had enough of his drama,now let us rule

josranvictorjosranvictoralmost 4 years ago
I aint talking about Hernandez

Yep bcoz in this chapter his appearance winds up the piece so am gonna compliment him in the next chapter....but yah HE IS FIREEEEEEE BABYY SO FUCKING HOT...HAHAHA so Brice got some brains after???? So shud i say he cares???? Let him rot in hell😎😎😎😎😎😎

😆😆😆😆😆😆theme songs;roar by katy perry

Am not afraid by eminem

Good form by nick minaj

So hard by my gal rihanna

Whats my name by rihanna

Savage by meghan tee stallon.......king Van if u dare to make us wait that long next time i swear i'll.......................,much love Van we love you

mfa607mfa607almost 4 years ago

I’m just catching up with this story and WOW! Loved this chapter! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You've done it again

Another incredible chapter. Thank you van. Now the big question is, is the wedding going to happen?. I can't wait to see that one. And one more thing I loovvveeee Adriana.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Eric is BACK!!!

This story just keep on getting more and more amazing. I just hope Eric has recovered from the heartache. Is he still single? Trev is so mad... The situation just got complicated I'm so nervous, what will happen next?. Thank you for the chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
When is the next part coming?

Dont get me worng but i have seen the frequency of your previous parts of this series and you posted new part every day. Why is it taking you time? I’m asking this beacuse i really like this series a lot and im worried about what happens next. This aniticipation is killing me... if possible could you put a tentative date of when the next episode is gonna be going forward?

vanalasvanalasalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Guys, I don't know why the admins are taking like ten days to approve a story because I have 2 pending stories. I'm sorry but I'm posting regularly but the site admins are taking too long

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

i like your story but your plot and characters are very repetitive. they're al the same. just with different names. cmon now you can do better

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