by vanalas
I love this! It is super awesome! But it is also extremely Dramatic, and don't get me wrong, I'm a huge Drama Queen, but this is a little too Dramatic, even for me. I wish everyone would just sit down and have a conversation, something mature. Could you make that happen?
Hmmmmmm i read the whole chapter in bliss and yeah i have to say that Kim is abit too much.....she doesnt listen to Baby Sergito am worried she might not be our bioligical Mama๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ถ๐ถeeeeh please let it not be true,fuck it would kill us
U know those fools are making it worse,is it Eric's fault the he shines just like the diamond he has bought????๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ u know Trev is so unreasonable and it aint making sense....hahaha he has to admit that Eric is diamonds himself coz trust me short of that,he is gonna have a killing heart attack soon...hahaha and he s stupid,their companies are falling apart yet he had guts to bid๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐a poor guy cannot beat a rich one hahahaha๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
For sure when he spilled the wine to Trev its what i had in my mind....Who does Trev think he. S hahahahaha and Adriannah has the guts to laugh at him....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃbut Van i swear i love Adriana,there is away she mocks Trev just remember the dinner part and at the party how she laughs when Trev is humiliated...i swear she makes the situation was for the guy...not to mention about his supplementary comments when Sergio was mad at,Trev in the dinner scene....Adriana will kill me one day,she is a saint just like Adrian of stand for love๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คbooboo
I swear that bitch Eric knows how to kiss....the way he slowly pushed Sergio ....fuck they are way too perfect,i swear they have made me happy in this new birthmonth of mine........Sergio needs some hot sex that will leave him breathless...i swear he needs it rough,Eric riding that dick like a maniac but yeah i dont know what he z gonna do coz mummy wants him married ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คbut nonetheless,the guy is hot eeeh ๐๐ can suck him......but no he is Eric's......but yeeeesssss he is a hunk and that dumbness he exudes when Eric is there makes him yummmy
Nope we ain't forgiving u easily.....he was more of an excuse of a father than a real now...no way huh,but Giada๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐bitch i pity her now cos she is a failure๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐...theme songs.....he is mine by brandy,megatron by nicki minaj,.....sorry by beyonce.....gonna fuck you by josran victor๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃam jocking
I miss and love you van
When starting to Reader and the story unfolded from romance into more drama i first liked it, especially the more evil character of Giada... But its getting more and more unrealistic drawing other characters on Giada's side for any good reason at all..... why on earth would Kim push her own son into a marriage? Its not like he or his fiance is pregnat.... And why does she not see that Giada's Business is going south being in the same Business and... and looking at potential sons in law it should be clear who the better catch is, or? Trev who seems to be only a spoiled son living at expence of his family or Eric a successful selfmade business men....
2 more things:
- Gay anal sex does not typically lead to bleading for the passiv guy and if its not bound to virginaty. Anatomically there is no "Skin" inside the rectum to be broken when first pentrated during intercourse.... If so this would have been riped when taking the first shit to make that clear
- the Description about everyones attire is not really adding to the plot ... Is rather getting repetitive and in some caes rather leads to questioning eitler taste or the definition of masculine appearance..
A little anoying too is the mix up of names in a number of scenes... that wears of a little of the actual value this Story still has
Overall I still like the characters u created and hope for a happy ending