All Comments on 'Game of Power Ch. 04'

As was the opportunity to get the first comment in :)

This update was awesome. I really love the way you write. Just wish the updates were sooner. I thought you had given up which I actually found quite upsetting. So happy that you plan to carry on!!

Nice to see another chapter for this lovely tale. Its strange how even after a year the title of the story was enough to resonate with me to check it out. I usually don't bother with stories that have already gotten a few chapters under them before I got to them. Be sure on your next release that you have a good teaser description to remind people that the wait is worth it.

Thanks for the post but I guess my question is why is it taking so long to post. This is neither a complicated or intricate story line. I like it a lot but if you're no going to post more often than once per year what's the point? I look forward to your next post but if it's a year from now I won't bother. Keep up the good work 4* for dragging it out so long.

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My only problem so far is that while I try to sympathize with her, she just convinces me more and more that she's a spoiled brat. Maybe that's the point? But it's pretty annoying. But damn 2 years for 4 chapters. With how frustrated she has me at the moment, I don't think I'll be able to read this part by part, having to suffer through her complaining until she finally stops.

The characters were a little one dimensional before but now there are a few layers to them. Airani is still a spoiled brat but you can see it's mostly out of necessity and circumstance and less by choice. She's still going to have a hard time letting her true personality be seen, but it will be good for her. Colton still seems a little too good to be true... sweet country boy, patiently waiting for her. I'm waiting for her to do something wrong and him to be angry with her. Not only does it seem inevitable, with their differences, but it will actually make her respect him more.

I'm looking forward to more of this story, though I find sporadic posting extremely annoying. Could you please let us know if you plan to post regularly? Otherwise, I might wait for the story to be a little further on before I get invested.

The story you have started us on is a good one love the characters. Can't wait fir more please

I need more. I'm so engrossed in this story already!

The author has updated their bio, fairly recently. Life has gotten in the way, as it tends to, but they are still working on this story. As someone who has enjoyed this story so far, I sincerely appreciate the update.

Update please!!!

The writing's great, but Airami's character disgusts me. She is haughty, petulant, condescending, and an overall bitch. Hope you can redeem her in your next installments. 5 stars though.

I really enjoyed this story of yours! Im gutted it looks like your lifes gotton too busy to update so i hope one day you do update it and i re-find it.

I love the build up you have and the amount of back story to explain and unravel is what made this such an interesting read for me. Plus it was super hot in places!

Ttfn xx

Your story intrigues me and drives me crazy. If you update this story again please give her some redeeming qualities. So far she's just a bitch and he doesn't deserve that.

I completely disagree with the people saying (in a nutshell) Airami's personality sucks. I absolutely love reading from a heroine's perspective who isn't the cookie-cut character SO many authors are guilty of perpetuating (including myself in the past, if I'm honest). A character SHOULD have disagreeable aspects to them, they should be a wonderful host of contradictions and flaws. The fun is watching them grow and seeing their perspective on the world shift. I don't want to read about another girl who's always got a kind word for everyone, who is about as layered and interesting as a sheet of cling wrap, and who could quite frankly be lifted out of one story and put in another with no discernable difference whatsoever. As a writer, it is so frustrating feeling like you're unable to do anything too unappealing to the masses. I say, screw that. I want to read about Airami. She's fresh, new, exciting, and I honestly don't know what she'll do next. I don't think I've ever read anyone quite like her as a lead for a werewolf story, and I'm stoked to find out more. Please keep it up, keep writing, you truly have a great talent. Can't wait to read more! -T

I love this story so much and I want to see how characters will progress!

I adore Airami!

Looking forward to the next one. I don’t see a problem with the female lead. She’s just got walls up to protect herself and has lived that way for centuries. I love her snarky thoughts and how she’s surprised time and time again. And they understand each other without nasty misunderstandings or hard words that often bubble between conflicted lovers. But Colton is just a hot darling. He should just spank her lol. 5* like the rest.

Waiting for the fifth chapter! When will you update?

Absolutely love the story line. I am looking forward to more chapters!

I first started reading the last chapter I thought I had missed one somewhere. I really enjoyed your story and can’t wait for the next chapter

So sad it ended here while she’s still a colossal bitch