by PickFiction
This one all but demands a sequel (or 2). So much to cover. Will Tony be accepted by her parents. Will Lisa find herself as she tries to bridge two distinctly different worlds. So much potential here. Well done!
Love comes in many guises and they all are legitimate. Somehow these two seem very young, but nothing is impossible if the love is sincere. 4*
A beautiful love story that was a joy to read!!! Thank you for sharing this fantastic story!
That was fun! And well written, especially with your gift for good dialogue.
It did make me think of the time I was cursed by a Gypsy in a piazza while in Florence, Italy. She even did the air spit thing at me. I’m still alive, so that’s all good.
5*, thanks for sharing.
CL
Thanks for this great story. And I fully agree with the other comments - more please!
5 stars for a great start. This story needs continuation, to a happy ending of course!
A genuinely _romantic_ story,
I know it's a mindless quibble, but anybody with a BS in engineering would have a job right away, with a company that'd pay for grad work.
Now if Tony had a BA in cultural anthropology, OTOH....
Very well told. I started out thinking she was a ghost but was pleased she was flesh and blood! 5*
You’ve created an interesting plot and setting, and two likable characters. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
One of the most captivating love stories on this website. My thank you from Germany for creating and sharing it!