by dr. Jocelyn
Wonderful story. Several good taboos that were confronted. I like a story with reluctance that is overcome by persistent, chivalrous--set selfish--intent. And you left the couple together, too, that was a nice touch. Personally i'll keep watching for Dez' return from Europe and to see if the girl is ever faced with a real decision between the two.
This story describes so well in detail the way to a woman's heart by letting her know how sexy and attractive she is, and by actually paying attention to her in a romantic, patient way. Thank you Dr. Joy!