All Comments on 'Gamers Pt. 07'

Your writing is fantastic, and the characters are incredibly well-rounded!

Poor Jazz, and poor Dean. I see a future where Dean sets her up in his mind as his long-distance sex-and-relationships guru, which is a role she clearly never asked for. Oh well, youth is wasted on the young.

On the brighter side, this means that your writing once again is spot on and conveys the folly of youth quite believably!

I thought that jazz and dean would still find a way to be together what a let down but still all and all good writing

I love this story line. You make the characters believable. I especially like the way you handle the long distance relationship. They suck and in my experience almost never work. Great story and maybe we will see the crew at GenCon? :)

Good that Dean is finally beginning to move on. Do hope he is allowed to share the wealth, as it seems he should at least have a chance for a relationship with "Vee." Good character development. Great read so far.

liked vee better

Probably my 6th or 7th time reading through this series, and every single time it always strikes me how well you articulate the emotions of your characters. Bravo to you.

Great writing. I'm a fan of Three Square Meals and found your writing, The Palace, while waiting for the next chapter of 3SM. You write really good. I hope you graduate to more substantial topics.

Loved it.

Scores 5/5

Really great writing!