All Comments on 'Games of Elfkind Ch. 04'

A minor point. Your character acknowledges that he doesn’t really know much about cup sizes, and then describes every woman in terms of them. IRL I categorize thusly when the issue comes up: small, nice, very nice, whoa and jeez. Also, IRL, don’t you find that many women dress to deemphasize the size of their breasts? Your plot is interesting and I like the writing so far. Good luck.

I realize that it has been a while, But I do hope you choose to complete the story at some future time!

I can't really rate the story yet since it isn't developed enough yet. Being well written and well told, the character development is really make or break for this story.

On the other hand, it's been more than good enough so far that I'd like to read more!

Realy like the story and looking forward to more, never give up the good and hard work.