All Comments on 'Games SOME People Play! Ch. 04'

Looks like you didn't change anything from the original story. Actually not even punctuation has moved. Why are you reposting?

I see you have been around for awhile. I published this entire novel for the very first time, chapter by chapter, on Literotica some years ago. I was using the pen name Clodia Pulcher. It may have had a different title, then. It was quite popular, when it was finished, and readership dropped off, I wanted to publish the whole thing as a book on Amazon. To be accepted for "Amazon Select," a book must not be available anywhere on the internet but Amazon, so I warned readers that I was removing it, if they wanted to copy it, and then removed all chapters from Literotica. Well, now, several years later, the Amazon Select is not an issue, anymore, and I thought publishing the chapters, again, on Literotica, where it had such a large, appreciative, and responsive audience, might attract people to the book and generate a few sales. And so, that is the whole story and I thank you for your interest. Cheers, Ellen.

You state this is a repost so I assume you end with the husband tied and sore assed. There are many avenues for the story to progress. Did you tire of the characters?

I find them an interesting ensemble. Several story arcs that are rattling around my mind as unanswered questions.

What was the wife's motive and what does she want to happen next?

Is the wife part of Butch's lesbian harem?

What was the wife doing during this drama? Did she watch? Was she shopping for shoes because she wants to be ready for her date with fill in the blank (man or men or woman or women) since she has video to blackmail hubby to be her cuckold.

You wrote from husband's perspective. What will he think, want and do when free?

I think this has to change the marriage relationship drastically.

Was hubby a closet fag or euphoric from orgasm to be so nonchalant about large dildo raping his ass? What happens when he is untied?

We're the 3 chapters just to get the guy fucked in the ass?

If you cannot write a male character that is not a lesbian harem's helpless toy then write the wife's perspective of her husband. Is he imasculated and to be dominated or appreciated as a good sport and loving husband? What generated this strategy?

Whether or not his marriage survives or is changed for good or bad the mother-in-law relationship is so ripe for more chapters. MIL future relationship with both daughters, SIL and Butch is at least a chapter.

So many opportunities for this ensemble. Thanks for the story.

No, I haven't tired of the characters at all. And it doesn't matter if I do because the book has been written. You can read it all at your leisure for about $2.50 on Amazon, "Games Some People Play," by Ellen Pierce Melville (me). I am going to post more, although, with incredible exceptions like you (you have a VERY active mind!), the interest seems tepid. Some of my stories have been turned down, here, but can be read in "The Slave Girl in Spartacus..." also on Amazon. Too much fantasy rape, bondage, and violence for Literotica. Thanks for thinking so hard about this story! Great pleasure to hear from you.

I know its a story thats written. Its pathetic to sodomize a man like that by a bunch of lesbians with something that large and to be punching and torturing his balls like that. its one thing to have consent--I know I be divorcing that wife for setting him up like that. Its truly pathetic

All good comments and all appreciated. This is a kinky story, for sure, and no everyone enjoys that. Some readers enjoy vicariously situations and actions they never would dream of permitting in real life. For those reasons who don't like Tommy's position in the story, there is relief in the chapter just posted. Not sure I'm going to get through posting the entire novel, but it is available on Amazon under my name. The book's history is explained at length in a comment I make above this one.

Tommy you can do your own stunts, ok. Butch you've killed three of Tommys erections in what a 1/2 hour ? Nice come back.

I'm looking ahead to the after the games, games Sandras clit needs further examination.

Things certainly can't ever be the way it was before *~*,