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Click here"I can't talk! Not with this up me! Do you want me to eat your dick?"
"If you can..."
And, in any instant, the lips closed on my rigid, up-thrust, bright-red prick. "Do it!" I breathed.
The face lifted to mine dissolved into tears, overflowing each wide and gazing green eye. But her small, exquisite pink lips had taken me and as flashes of red flared in her cheeks, and her whole body stiffened, her tongue circling my prick was ecstasy.
I yelled, "Stop, Susan, stop! When do you know to stop? It isn't as though Steph's going to come—or that you are!"
"Okay," said Susan. "Fine. Is she okay?"
And to Stephanie: "Okay, Sis?"
The pretty head lifted away from my belly. Her eyes for a moment were shut and she straightened up very slowly like someone with a backache. Then, her hand slipped behind her and I saw she was sweeping it through her crack. I watched as she glanced down at the hand; the tips of all her fingers were smeared with blood. The delicate shoulders shrugged and she made a fist of her hand to conceal her fingertips.
"That was amazing!" she said.
"Your turn, Tommy," said Susan cheerfully.
- COMMENTS
EllenMelvilleover 6 years agoAuthorand small rain down may rain... And I have a genuine, thoughtful--actually penetrating--comment from Anonymous! What I pleasure! Christ, were my lover in my arms, and I in my bed, again...
There are systematic authors, who outline the plot, and there are seat of the panties authors, like me, who just start writing without a clue. I suppose the dynamic between husband and wife when the marriage bed is mostly for sleeping was the first conflict. Then the younger sister. The dynamics of birth order make the older-younger sister relationship in a family with no boys loving, competitive, spiteful, bullying, defiant...
A strong mother like Sandra adds another conflict, tending to push the two daughters closer. None of this needless to say was explicitly in my mind as I wrote, though certain not far from my mind. As the story rolled on, I could see three strong women, all highly sexed, reassessing their roles. Also, Stephanie emerges as the obviously identified patient, not Sandra, and the whole thing becomes a group therapy session organized by Kinsey.
The story is told entirely from Tommy's point of view, so, in a sense, the three women are on a level playing field.
Thanks for stimulating me!
Anonymousover 6 years agoInteresting changing of roles throughout the story. Stephanie giving pain, then receiving, Susan and Sandra giving, Tom receiving. All observing. Did my enjoyment of the story change depending on who was in which role?
Stephanie in particular, I find fascinating. Does her pleasure derive from revenge on Tom for his previous chauvinistic behaviour? Indeed, is her receiving pain a means of torturing Tom, him knowing that he will be next. Or is pain just an extension of pleasure to her?
Very intense. Should I be enjoying it so much? Should I feel guilty? At the end, Steph enjoyed it and spouse Susan is happy. Salvation is given. Or is it?
