by erectus123
That was a good one. I'll be waiting at Hobo Junction next year but would appreciate if you'd post the exact address and the day of arrival. I have favored you and the story. My name is also Jerome. Looking forward to meeting both of you.
Please rate this story a 5 so it will entice new readers. If you hated it just move on and tell me what an ass I am. All the best.
I liked the premise of the story and the sex was fairly well written, but all that gentlemanly talk from those hobos sounded really dumbass. Ok, different types of guys can find themselves homeless and you illustrated this very well, but given the circumstances, their behaviour and. language would have been a lot more lewd and crude, which would have given the sex sessions a lot more edge. I gave you 4* and favourited the story, well done.