All Comments on 'Garter Belts and Cigarettes'

My oh my...such a story...you captured my favorite fetish’s so well. Well written...beautiful sexy story. Thanks.

Jerry

Great story. Probably my favourite it a long time on here. I want to be Ruby!

Very nicely paced; the long, slow buildup, then the acceleration, the need, and the fast climax! Excellently done.

Love how you pick on a simple detail or two and expand this into very original erotica

One of your best, EBs. This fetish has long intrigued me, but the way you write it, it's no mystery anymore. You're an author who truly understands his characters. Lovely bit of work.

An erotic story on an erotic story site. Who knew!

I kept picturing Monica Bellucci, as she appeared in Malena. Ruby appears to be just as magnificent a smoking seductress. Excellently written story.

Whew that was good! I’m usually repulsed by smoking, but not this time.

I have long been a fan of smoking fetish erotica - can’t even begin to count the number of stories I have read over the years. This is my favorite. Hands down. Thank you.

Simply superb, like a gallery of sensous paintings having one detail in common.

My that was very well written!

You have a very artistic way of telling your story.

Very erotic, thanks ;->

Amazingly written, sensual and very relateable

Wow!!!

Splendid!

I like to promote the idea of "pure erotica," as an alternative to "stroke stories," to try to avoid the connotation of stories that don't care about style. I'd been thinking that theY refer to the same thing except for that connotation aspect.

But this story is, to my mind, "pure erotica," in that every paragraph aims to support arousal, either directly or leading up to it. But for most of the story there's no actual "stroking" going on. They're clothed. They're in public. They're not touching. They're SO EROTIC!!