All Comments on 'Gary Gets His Wish'

by baddad53

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 14 years ago
Start was okay, but ....

what the hell was this about? Wife doesn't like Gary, so husband arranges for Gary to fuck wife. Huh? Maybe the other comment was on to something: the narrator REALLY wants to fuck/be fucked by Gary, and now he gets his chance. Better change the story code, though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Good story. It's nice for a change to read a story where both the wife and husband want to spice up their sex life.

Don't know what the negative comments are about. They must not have read the same story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I don't see any gay sex

What gay? It's straight sex with three consenting adults.

mudhentwomudhentwoabout 14 years ago
wifey..

I wish my wife were that depraved....!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Mystifying story

i have read this story twice and I still do not understand the point of the story. Gary is a letcherous bastard that the wife apparently can't stand, but husband is always inviting him over and when he is there wife gets horny and wants sex immediately from her husband. Finally husband invites Gary to fuck his wife and they both have sex with her. What is the point of the story?

the Ct. Yankee

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Were you going for the 'wife manipulates him using the old Tom Sawyer whitewash the fence ploy?....'

...you write well and your base will like your plots but just too close to an icky lifestyle for most, I'd bet. Think day and age. In 1973 you would be stylin'

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Threesomes always have a cuck and whore or they wouldn’t be in LW.

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