All Comments on 'Gary?s Hot Tub Affair'

Great story. Great dynamics and flow. I don't often see things written this well and I hope others say the same. Times have certainly changed since Henry Miller's "Sexus".

James Lacey, a truly great writer, has given the reader her a glorious if far too short romantic story, with great character development and an excellent plot that is enhanced by tender and passionate romantic love. Five stars only because six stars is not possible. Unfortunately, James Lacey no longer seems to be writing.

I honestly have a disagreement about punctuation we can agree to disagree on, but the verb for things done in a hot tub is NOT "tubing"!

THAT'S what's done in/with a tube, like toothpaste!