by AnotherOldWriter
This story was well-written, aptly-paced, and it would be great if you wrote a sequel.
Great story! Please continue the journey to LA. This could turn out to be a great benefit for both of them. What kind of work dies he do? Could she help him? Lots of possibilities!!!
Great story line and charcter development. Jill is going to become a real spitfire! Much more please!
Really well written. I wish you had expanded the story including each of the characters sexual growth, but it still was very hot.