All Comments on 'Gateways Grind'

What a beautiful, lovely, yet erotic story. Well written and well told. One of my favs. Thank you for taking the time to write and share it.

Rose Monroe 🌹

You finally shared a piece in the Romance category and as a near hopeless romantic, thanks. I enjoyed your main characters, their connection and any number of the scenes you created within this short, densely packed piece: “I won’t ask a third time.”; rescuing Elsie from being raped; the treasured scrap of pink silk; the cramped toilet sex; and finding Maggie again (another rescue you might say). Your closing scene very poignant. If I have a complaint it’s how so much happened at a fast pace — not helter skelter/confusing rather whirlwind like and wish you would have embellished here and there. Probably my wishful thinking as a near hopeless romantic. Will definitely reread.

One of the most beautiful stories I have read. Thank you.

I'm not a fan of lesbian stories as most are just purely fantasy. This one I throughly enjoyed and it felt real. I never thought I would feel tears in eyes but I did. The end was beautiful. So well written.

That was so romantic and beautiful. Why did it end like that 😭?

this story was written so romanitcally, great attention keeper. solid four stars.

True love ,will out. The ending, made me cry. Well done .

beautiful story

Short and grand. Thanks!

Would it could be that way for all of us. Thank You.