by erotigayman
Give either young man a bit of chest hair for that sexy muscular chest...something extra to see and touch and taste...
I can only wish something like this to happen t9 me. Wow.
Try making a story that doesn’t fetishize black girls and Latina girls. You could’ve easily said you were watching two girls finger themselves or even been descriptive about their features. But you just had to include their race because it makes it more “spicy” huh?
Well written, and very teasing. Can't wait until I read the rest. Just a note, from personal experience- don't mind the critics or the suggestions from those who don't write themselves- write what you like. You won't- and can't- please everyone. "Write what you want to read" is the best advice I ever received.
I ready for part two of this story since it was just getting started.