All Comments on 'Geist Ch. 03'

This is a bit frightening. Avery really never had a chance. I know there is more.

Good story, but the fucker needs to pay. MAKE HIM PAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please please please continue! I don't want to wait for the ending!

this is sooooo good I can't wait for the next chapter

Hi, all. This is Naughty... I'm Gweall's editor. As I was looking this over today, I realized that we must have accidentally posted the unedited version! I apologize in advance and we'll be sure that the next chapters are the edited versions!!!!!

Thanks for all the wonderful comments. I started as editor part way into this story-- and so to see the comments really mean a lot to me... and I know they do to G as well.

~Naughty

Naughty, you're forgiven! Lucky me (along with THOUSANDS of others I'm sure), I've already read the entire story off the blog many times over. This story never gets old! To end the chapter with that cliffie -- wow! Again, SOOOOO good!!! <3 <3 <3

What a twist, can't believe it is the same Michael, grampa was right about it ruining his life, but how on earth could Michael suppress those memories??. The guilt alone would kill him. Beautiful

Tears cannot stop flowing haha.. this is just too sad. Avery leads a sad life though, Thomas doesn't deserve this

This is sad...do not like...I love it...