All Comments on 'Genesis Project Ch. 07'

Excellent, I enjoy Literotica, but your story is one of the 2 that has me coming back everyday to check for updates. Please keep up the great work and if you publish you have at least one sale.

hehe rebellion. fair work there, and yep your stories got me hooked to search more like these series every day. leep on writing and dont's stop:)

-LW

Very Cool Story so far.

You writing is getting better and better with each installment.

Look forward to reading more. Do you plan on introducing any erotic story lines?

there is some real talent here...

I know that you have heard it enough but when are you going to introduce the erotic elemant to your story telling??

I like the story so far, but the Captain has to be one stupid idiot. First he takes off in the fighter and doesn't tell anyone, then when he finds damaged ship instead of returning to his own ship and letting others know about it he lands on the ship. Them he finds the slavers he still just bulls forward without using any brain cells. Then after he kills all the lizard slavers he's stupid enough to think that just because he saved the slaves that means they will be friendly? So what does he do, takes off his armor. The idiot should be DEAD!!!!!!!!

ofc hes a reckless idiot.... hes a male!!

Another great chapter can't wait for the next

Excellent story...