All Comments on 'Genesis Project Ch. 11'

You made me laugh with this new 'power'.

This is more like the story line :) Nice touch on the extra organ in brain... For a bit I thought you had gone wacko when you had posted chapter 10... but chapter 11 is more what I expected:)

An excellent story line. Fun to read. Just a few points though. You keep changeing your tenses from first person to third to second and it gets a bit confusing. Also you need to pay more attention to your spelling. However - I love what you have written and can't wait for more. P.S. Thundercats? Whats the big deal about that name?

15 years ago!!!!!