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JohnnyMaxover 10 years agoThird person
Good start. Third person made it less of a story. Stories like this always seem better in First person tense.
ErosinaScarlettover 5 years agoHot Fantasy
This is one of the few times I’ll comment on grammar. Should have proof read before posting but otherwise a hot intense fantasy
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