by autoplot
Very nicely framed and plotted. Believable dialogue and plausible build-up. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would have liked him cumming inside of her, but I'm sure that is left for the imagination where that one goes. Overall, 5 stars. Well done!
Very hot!
I could see the small cabin, the snow and them in the firelight fucking. Just father and daughter fucking! Please continue their story/adventures.
Like the person said earlier, it was as though I could feel.and see the cabin and hear the fireplace.
I believe this was my third time reading this story and it still amazes me. The author's ability to so wonderfully develop the Nina character in such a short tale takes talent. The scenes were well crafted and the dialog believable. And hot too. Very.
Five shiny stars for the author!