All Comments on 'Gently Falling Snow'

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kmac99kmac99about 4 years ago
A delciate hand

Very nicely framed and plotted. Believable dialogue and plausible build-up. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would have liked him cumming inside of her, but I'm sure that is left for the imagination where that one goes. Overall, 5 stars. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yep...

Yep, this made my panties wet.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Great story. Very hot.

chytownchytownabout 4 years ago
Enjoyable Sexy Read***

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
PLEASE MAKE THIS A SERIES!

Or at least a sequel!

It was sooo good!

Frankenstein1962Frankenstein1962about 4 years ago
Great story.

Loved this story, please continue. Frankie

Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dover 3 years ago

Very hot!

I could see the small cabin, the snow and them in the firelight fucking. Just father and daughter fucking! Please continue their story/adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More. It was written very well

Like the person said earlier, it was as though I could feel.and see the cabin and hear the fireplace.

RainierWriterIIRainierWriterIIabout 2 years ago

I believe this was my third time reading this story and it still amazes me. The author's ability to so wonderfully develop the Nina character in such a short tale takes talent. The scenes were well crafted and the dialog believable. And hot too. Very.

Five shiny stars for the author!

ToughSailorToughSailor10 days ago

Just another cookie cutter trope . . . .

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I write unbelievable stories with believable characters, or at least as believable as I can. I am fascinated by incest taboo, especially father/daughter, so that's mostly what I write about. My output here has slowed, but I still write and post when I can. Thanks to everyone ...