by jlo24601
Love the slow pace. Love the erotic tension in the business trip (classic!) / empty restaurant / sexy (young!) waitress thing. Good effort at making April a real person, not (just) a sex object. Look forward to seeing more.
Chilled Pinot Noir? I think not...
Also, his "excursion" to Heather was unnecessary.
But I liked the story up to the moment you wrote "You're going to fuck me, aren't you?"