by wajawhiii
Your descent into a political rant in the opening paragraphs totally alienated me.
Political views had no place in this story. Maybe you have not lost a loved one, your job or seen the effects that the virus has had but that rant took away from any enjoyment I had from the previous story. Just my opinion and it is your story.
I enjoyed it. Well done for the most part. As a New England Swamp Yankee, I neither know nor care about MI politics, however I detest over broad rulings of any sort, thus was not offended by the political remarks. I certainly look forward to continuation as there are avenues to explore.
I think politics in this story is fine, and that senator in michigan is really one of the most crazy bitches. Lying and lying. It's not about politics anymore. It's about senators/politicians doing everything to ruin the lives of the people living there. Making it unsafe, and too expensive. So I'm glad it was pointer out in the story, that's she is a crazy fanatic. You can't ignore politics your whole life, when your living environment is slowly being ruined by those corrupt people.
By the way another nice story to read...
Anyone mad about having to stay home in a global pandemic is a loser. Stupid story. Inject bleach if that's your jam, cult fascist.
People complaining, or downvoting as a result of, the mention of the virus/pandemic/etc. should get over it.