All Comments on 'Georgia'

I really enjoyed your ability to convey the feelings of angst and arousal in your story, and I found the experience rather erotic. You also have a very good vocabulary. "Concupiscence" is one of my favorite words, and it was nice to see you using it. That praise being said, now comes the technical issue. Your punctuation use is abysmal, and there's too many errors to ignore. Please continue to write, but please find an editor or proofreader. Thanks.

Thank you for that. Not an excuse, but Georgia was written in 2008 whereas its spiritual sequel, Den, was written in 2022. My punctuation got better, but there are still a few typos and things I noticed after submission in Den. I will absolutely take advantage of the on site editors on future.

Well, I love the context of the story using trigger words to turn off and on the arousal of someone's body. I was dismayed at the ending when the bar owner knew the trigger word. I hope that her husband comes back and finds out what happened to her. Perhaps another chapter to see just how far she goes down the rabbit hole. There are so many options to explore, with the ending of where she is brought out of her trance.

Really enjoyed the story. Definitely rang my bells, regardless of the lack of logic behind the whole thing. Would love to see a continuance of the story. Thanks very much!

this is a great idea of a story. i alway love the uncontrollable part of a cuckold wife prostitution story, and the good end after it.

I've loved this story for years. Glad you reposted it here!