by Softly
This was fun to read - the care taken in the dialogue and the marvelous plot twists really had a nice hook of an ending. The only thing I feel should have been handled was taking care of her parents - when she got rich.
Do some more ...
The casting couch is alive for you, and the periods and people are mixed.
So the moral is, escape the business and go back to 'normal'? And the surgeon made her less attractive?