All Comments on 'Gerald's Girl Ch. 1 & 2'

by Amadeus

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amorous2amorous2over 14 years ago
Well written

Very good story includes sexy, exciting details. Builds nicely and is very believable. Can't wait to see what happens.

devilspydevilspyalmost 10 years ago
I don't see how she is being neglected?

Her husband is fucking her or she is fucking him. They seem to be getting along well. Maybe they where hiding the tension between them. Seems a bit odd that hubby is trying to get her to admit that the Yank turns her on. But you do have me interested enough to read another chapter.

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