All Comments on 'Gerald's Girl Ch. 4'

I have just finished reading the stories that you have so far submitted and I rather like your style.

Having written many but not submitted, I am aware of your reasonably good descriptive way of using the English language . . . BUT . . . I do feel you lack some seriousness in your usage of words that can be seriously used. Now mind you I am aware that you seem to have a much better grasp of words & punctuation than most so . . . I congratulate you on a well written story.

I have been waiting with baited breath for ch5. the suspense is killing me!!

continue to die - this story stopped 12 years ago.