by silverisgold
I lived the sexual details in your story. Made me want to Fuck you.....
You left the ending perfectly situated for a continuation .... more of Erin's friends - those who 'volunteered' - should come in the next few chapters. And, of course, bring Emily back!
Great story! I remember a young girl that worked for a few summers at my office. She was 21 when she started and I finally got into her pants 12 years later. My story is along different lines but it's still a much younger woman with an older man. Thanks!
I think we're going to need another 4 or 5 chapters. Minimum.
Already read the 3 chapters, all three of them are 5 star.
I just thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful story. First story I've read by this writer...but it definitely won't be the last.*****
Wild
Far out
Unbelievable
Unlikely
WONDERFUL.
Left me chuckling as it ended.
So obviously ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.
Paul in Oklahoma
P. S. Oh yes, it was VERY well written --
great use of language,
scintillating dialog,
admirable story-telling skills.