All Comments on 'Getting Caught'

that was incredible. i want to be mr.d

that was incredible. i want to be mr.dp.s. would you move beside me

You can count on Lily to produce a well-crafted story that draws you in from the beginning. But this one was special. It rang my bell several times! Great job!

So did he fuck you through the weekend and give you a seed to grow for the next 9 months?

And I agree with the comment below, was there a seed planted?

Lol, I can't get older man fantasies out of my head either! Loved your story, reading the comments left before me I do get curious. About the seed and everything, you should write a squel.

I found you through MugsyB's page. A very hot little story. Not a bad piece of writing. What girl didn't have a fantasy about an older neighbor/friend of the family when she was younger? I know I had a fantasy about a friend's dad, but that's all it ever was....a fantasy.

The hesitation of Mr. D created tension and the vulnerability (part real part playful) of Gina was very erotic. Bravo!

Thanks for the fantastic visuals and your attention to detail.

that was so amazing! I love stories of older men. It drives me crazy! Thanks:)

Love your vivid descriptions of your feelings. It was sensual and erotic. Keep those stories coming.

one hell of a storie, ever dirty old mans dream! all of your stories are great. keep on writing you are a great author.

This had me stroking my mature cock, well written I could see myself as Mr D. What a delight to have a young lady pleasuring herself and me.

horny in Strathmore

Thats not fair to post such a hot story for a old guy, the older I get the better I was.Does every young woman like salt and pepper, when she is the main dish ?

"Do you want to cum in my little girl pussy?"

JFC this story took me places. So hot. Great effort.

As last poster said, well that line did it for me too ;)

you hurt this old man's heart. Wife been a number of years and there wasn't anything happening before that...I long for a woman's touch and to have someone like this, is out of the realm of possibility for me. Great story

Of an old guy getting lucky with a younger gal! I wish I could be so lucky!

You and me both would love to be mr D 😊

I enjoyed this story. Well written and well paced.

I really like this story. It is well written and felt believable to me.

Covered ground left remaining to reader

Liked

Resd

Fantastic erotic story. How I wish I lived opposite you and had some letters to deliver....ha ha ha XXX

Absolutely loved it. Thank you

Fantastic. I remember my one time neighbor giving me some

Christmas cards. After my wife passed away. It was just what

this old man needed. Thanks Again

this was so fantastic and so hot and so surprisingly soft? thank you so much for posting!

The girl is stated to be of legal age, but her description- petite, small tits, no hips- plus the little girl talk, makes me think of a disguised pedo- story. Makes this dirty old man unhorny.

No consideration given to pregnancy in the story.

I’m definitely an old fart. & I wouldn’t acquiesce to a young girl on the spur of the moment & definitely not without a condom.

Can’t you just imagine the consequences a few months later when she announces her pregnancy?

Or how about—courtesy of her boyfriend—you need to explain to your wife how it came about that she needs to be treated for an std.

No, these stories should be set in a real world even if they are fantasy.

Bill S.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Great Love Story Five Stars

Loved this! I wanted more

Great story! Very descriptive! I like the younger girl older guy thing. It doesn't happen often enough although it's amazing when it does.

Unfortunate that she's not writing anymore. :(

That writing was absolutely the hottest damn story, yet! Thank you!

so hot