All Comments on 'Getting Caught Opens Her Doors'

Like the story, keep going please

you have a good story line ... the sex is good.

... however ...

the writing needs some serous help. there are some pretty good editors available on the site ... pick one whose writing you like; give him ( or her ) a try.

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good luck !

"With an almost scary cry, Julie started to cum, and I felt her pussy cover my cock and

Pubic hair, I felt her cum run down either sides of my legs, but she continued, knowing I was going to follow suit, with slightly less vigor but enough for me while looking her in the eyes, to mouth the words I'm cuming."

The work has merit but really lacks grammar skills. You should ask for editor help and resubmit a better version.

I'll be waiting for a follow up to the story. There should be one.

Lucky guy, I don't do anal because I don't want to hurt any woman