All Comments on 'Getting Closer to Tera Pt. 01'

From that, are we to infer he basically has the same somewhat dominant relation with Angela? If so, does that portend this becoming a threesome?

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FYI, that should have been "her mother and I". Two quick ways to figure this out.

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1) Replace the list with "me" or "I" and see it it makes sense.<P>

"She's definitely been listening in on me."<P>

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"She's definitely been listening in on I."

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2) The other way is to replace the list with "we" or "us." If "we" fits, use "I". If "us" fits, use "me".<P>

"She's definitely been listening in on we."<P>

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"She's definitely been listening in on us."

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"Us" is more natural, so it should have been, "She's definitely been listening in on her mother and m."

How he will solve the wife’s position

This is as bad as it possibly could be. Ridiculous dialogue and absolutely no credibility whatsoever. You just copied a little bit of everything from other stories and wrote them into this Daddy rubbish.

Cue the comments about anonymous posters from people hiding behind a user name.

...but learn to spell! ("...grabbed my hand and lead me to the bed." It's led, not lead!

1st. Anonymous with all the points, get over yourself!

2nd. I liked it hoping for part 2 soon.

Pt 2 please!!!