All Comments on 'Getting Even Pt. 01'

Looking forward to see where this series goes

Good story, call me dimwitted but I'm not quite sure what it had to do with the title. It's not like he'd been betrayed.

Excellent writing. Some of the best writing I've ever read here. If you're not a professional writer, you should consider being one. On the other hand... The story is like a soap opera. And I hate soap operas. As a consequence -- 2/5.

I like the story and the potential story lines.

I hope you hav time and energy to produce the follow-on writings. I am looking forward to see where you take the characters.

Who does Ben end up with.

Please put me in the plus category as well. This was a nice story, well written and framed to hold the reader's interest well enough to look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing this little gem.

5 stars

This sounds like the start of a revenge story. Nothing better than revenge!

You definitely need to do more of this one!

I have loved your stories in the past, but it I really didn't care for this to be honest. Maybe I missed read some points about the main character in the beginning, because his decisions towards the end of the chapter didn't make sense to me, and they made it hard for me to suspend my disbelief.

It's pretty obvious that the ladies are fucking with his friends emotions, and to me, the way you wrote the character it doesn't seem like he was someone that would just sit by and say nothing.

OK. You got me. I am hanging on finding out what the hell is going ion in these girls' heads. 5 Stars.

MC should avoid Anita, her Mac and pimp game is on another level. In other words she is a snake in the grass and he is a rabbit.

***** Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

I've no idea where you will ultimately take this, but the Millie intro, the Anita curve ball along with the Kira slider is quite the compilation. Of course, that makes 3 girls vs 3 guys, which could have some hidden significance. Add to that Millie isn't discounting a future hookup with Ben. Carla appears to be a wildcard and Anita is somehow riding the fence, despite being the confident and assertive one?

I enjoyed it and have to read ch 2 already. :P 5

Love me some Terry Pratchett! (R.I.P)

I was waiting for you to write something..,great 1st story of series...

Could it be a different Anita?

Good writing and interplay between the parties. Ben has all the questions and I hope good intuition. I've never had that, I'm just a mechanic and fix things. Just met cute little 19 year old blond over 40 years ago, she even had 2 year old. Dated screwed her bareback got her pregnant and married her, She got bored with me after 13 years and went lookin'. I was one ignorant 26 year old at the time. Oh well, live and learn. Did meet my soul mate that last 40 years. Story is lookin good so far!

So thanks to you I had to Google Terry Pratchett, I'm horrible with names, I read constantly, and if its not on my shelf....

Good Omens. Excellent read and not a bad tv show. Could have been better, but curled up with some popcorn and it does make you giggle. I would recommend if anyone is reading this.

In any case, thank you, as always, for your excellent story telling....

Good writing, sounds like some of the confusing situation I got into when I was dating years ago.

Hoegaarden… enough said haha

I like it, can't see where you intend going, but hats a good thing, does look as if your trying to show off about things you know or like, how into it you are.