All Comments on 'Getting Fucked in a Tent'

Wicked!!!! What a sexy short story, my poor pussy was gushing with Amelia’s.

Please write the next chapter, I want to read how Jasmine cleans Amelia up and the details of the rest of this sublime weekend away.

I’m a girl who loves pussy stories.

That story was so hot, my pussy is so wet right now

Hit me on gmail if you wanna chat or recreate

Lolalita8708

Writing very lame unfortunately. How many sentences begin with the name of one or other of the girl's? Practically all of them. We could get involved and enjoy it more if the writing was more natural. Ever tried writing in the first person? Then at least we could understand the feelings of one of the characters.

I'm so wet right now from coming with Amelia. I tried to read the story without touching myself but when the dirty talk began it was impossible not to plunge two fingers inside of my cunt

I love dirty talk. Its my weakness that always makes me cum

Whenever my girlfriend calls my vagina a cunt its like the flood gates open and I release a obscene amount of pussy juice

I can relate to what Amelia did when Jasmine touched her G spot. Irs a secret place that we all have inside of our cunts and there's no stopping from coming once its touched

The only thing that I would have added is the way that it smelled like pussy because being in close quarters it was bound to smell as Amelia was gushing while Jasmine was touching her

Great story. Hope you continue with telling us about these two girls

The story was pretty good to be honest the only thing I would have done differently would try to change up the beginning of each sentence. Either way this was a very good story. Hope you make more!