All Comments on 'Getting Hot'

This one needs continued. They need to keep fucking and make a baby between them, so both of their parents can be natural grandparents.

You've definately left some room for the story to develop. There is a certain simplicity with this story which is appealing. Keep it natural (ie: no mystery plots, group sex or pornerotica) and this story will be unique and very readable.

This is by far one of my favorite stories on this website! I loved the tenderness between the two characters, it was really sweet. I wouldnt mind her getting pregnant either, after all their not blood related! lol

I'm Kate, of the Benn & Kate team.

This was HOT. PLEASE continue it! I really enjoyed the pillow talk, and that, if nothing else, makes me want to learn more about the two of them.

One of the best stories i have read. Natural and sensual. Please Making another chapter and keep it how it'sgoing no crazyness.

You really know how to stir up a guy.

I only just discovered your works and this is my second reading of you.

Sorry I am in a definite tizzy and not thinking straight.

Okay giggles head off. The S in M.S.Tarot is for Sebastian.

Loved the story, very well played in the seductive stare down, been there done that.

One thing, more as an observation than a criticism, as hot as the south is without an AC running sex is like fucking a waterfall. Make them sweat!

The ground is so warm the water is always luke warm. The pipes are not very deep since it seldom freezes here.