All Comments on 'Getting It Out Of Our Systems'

Enjoyed it!

Good back story. Good build up. Good finish, with a promise for more. Keep writing! :-)

Very well constructed and written with realistic dialog (not easy). I think you must have spent a good deal of time polishing it and it was worth the effort.

- Gabby.

Really enjoyed the story. A pleasure to read. I hope you and Sally have more encounters! She's a lucky lady!!

Thanks so much for submitting this--it was incredibly sexy and so provocative! Awesome -- loved every minute of it!

... for all the feedback. It's most encouraging!

More to cum, I hope!?

this could and should be the start of a longer story. The characters are good and the possibilities are endless. You don't tell us much about Sally's body, tall or short, shaved or hairy, dark or light nipples blue or brown eyes. Lots more details to be included in the next episode.

Made me wet ;)

Cheating asshole, dirty whore, ruined relationships apparently don't matter.