by Libertine
EXCELLENT.
You have captured the essence of erotica in this story, you have an insight into the psyche of both a young inexperienced male and that of a more mature female.
Congratulations and thank you for publishing your excellent work on this site.
Author has a excellent grasp on sex, relationships, and literature. Literotica at its best.
Do you realize how you captured the imagination of at least one middle aged woman? I'll never look at a young man without thinking "what if." Where is this wonderful land?
MaryAnn
These are fine adventures and all the better for being educational also.