by Fenris420
Five stars. This story has the right amount of hot and steamy sex, with just enough romance.
Pretty darn good
5*
Tc
Ps. I always love it when "The End" gets its own page. ;)
I like this type of story where brothers have feelings for their sisters and they're trying to hide them, but this story wasn't that well written or had drama/conflict that would make it a really good story.
I like this type of story where brothers have feelings for their sisters and they're trying to hide them, but this story wasn't that well written or had drama/conflict that would make it a really good story.
Excellent story.
Really enjoyed it, liked the setup and how it progressed...Great job!
good story please part 2 she gets pregnant and live happy ever after and momma accepts it
Good story but the tongue-in-cheek first person thing got distracting after a while. 4*
Excellent story and yes, we need more older sister, younger brother stories,
At the beginning Sarah was portrayed as this College Bound Party Going Sex Craving Whore,that probably fucked half the college guys there,and maybe even other girls.So Sarah being so scatter-brained didn't give a fuck about Kyle as long as she got her pussy filled by hot college guys,and also maybe not even hot but mediocre ones as well.
But my point is Sarah was too happy with her lifestyle to even think about Kyle or anyone elses feelings.But then after 6 long years she comes back with her pussy filled with god knows how many guys cumloads she took,and yet Sarah was so selfcentered to realize her brother Kyle had saved his virtue and virginity for a Skanky College Whore of a Sister.
In a way Sarah wasn't worthy of having Kyle as a brother,but after Sarah's revelation she did see how stupid and blind she was and went to rectify the situation.But it just made Sarah seem like a selfish greedy bitch at the beginning.
@RodimusMike - You're not wrong about Sarah. When I write a story, it's always with an eye on telling a tight story without too much introspection that might send my core idea off on a tangent that, quite frankly, would be boring to some. I think some of us, when growing up and taking those first independent steps into the wider world, have an idea of what we want, only to find that what we thought we wanted didn't live up to expectations and that what we had was pretty special. Thanks for commenting in a thoughtful way.
Sorry I was kinda put off by the story even though I thought it was a good story and funny ending for page three it’s just my boss named Sarah and her son named Kyle so it’s kinda weird to me