All Comments on 'Getting My Son-In-Law Hooked'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You need to find an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great manipulation

Good seduction technique with the whole scent while he sleeps idea. I loved how she got him addicted to her before even having her. Hope you have more stories like it.

donnaeliza25donnaeliza25over 8 years ago
Family fun

That was a great story and can't wait to read some more. xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

...got me excited...and needs more to tell......!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not only...

did she hook her son-in-law -- you hooked me. A sequel would be a bonus to an already fine story. Thanks!

newtype2525newtype2525over 8 years ago
Very nice!

Chapter two please! Asap!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the story, would have thought there would quite a few chapters to write here! Why did you stop?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Stopped reading the moment I realized it involved annoying POV swaps, instead of just using 3rd person throughout.

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