All Comments on 'Getting Over Edie Ch. 05'

I'm a huge fan. You never disappoint.

Five.

Continue, this story is helping me my break up. I am totally Grady in every single way. There needs to be more stories like this

And as brilliant as ever. Stellar chapter to a stellar story!

I'm so happy to see another posting. I've been anxiously waiting for another post. I love this chapter. Reading about Grady is like reading about myself. It's an eye opener. I wish I had the outlet that he had, luckily I have GREAT friends.

EXCELLENT JOB... 5 ALL THE WAY

So glad you posted another chapter. Your writing has kept me entertain for as long as I've read your stories. You never disappoint!

...how amazing this story is. It sums up a lot of what people go through after a rough break up. And it is so awesome that you wrote it from a man's perspective. We all hurt the same, cry the same, and bleed the same. Whether you are male or female. Going on this journey with Grady has been very therapeutic for me. I just want to thank you for sharing your talent with us. And keep on writing this amazing literature. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I am in love with this story. The dance scene was especially amazing to me. I hope that you will be able to keep going on this, though I totally get the way things come up and keep stuff from being written. Keep up the amazing work.

Hoping you can post regularly for the next little while.

You really have a talent for writing. I can see your characters in my head.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I can't wait for Ch. 6!

Awww I love it so far! Now, I'd like to know what relationship skeletons Arden has in her closet! Good job, can't wait for Chp. 6!

LOL! Loving the direction this story is taking. God, Kade was so fucking miserable at the beginning of this story, I wanted to slit my wrists - fuck! Seriously though, it was a good beginning to the story, his downward spiral at having his heart broken, the transition with his friends along the way is great, and his growing affection for Arden is heartwarming - and hot - and leaves the reader hopeful that the two of them will find a new and more perfect love with each other. Looking forward to more of the story. :oD

Loving that they didn't go all the way..to soon!!!!!! Love the characters!

You are magnificent! I love this story and I am feeling the emotions and like someone else stated I can totally see the character. A story and a writer like you make wading through all the stories worth it. Thank you and keep writing.

Please do 6 soon. I am enjoying your writing. I can't believe I got cliff-hangered (is that really a word?)

Keep it up.

I've now read everything you have posted on this site. You really do a great job at getting the reader to know and understand your characters. I also like your references to music having been a DJ myself back when vinyl was the only choice.

This is a really good story. I started it because I thought it was complete, but it isn't. Ahhhh! Please finish the story. Thanks.

I cant get enough of your writing. The range of emotions; Ive held my breath more times reading your stories that I sometimes have to stop reading so I can exhale and try to look normal...hehehe. I cant wait to read more about Arden and Grady. Hope we get to read more about them soon. Thank you!

This was such a fantastic character study. From start to finish, the way you delved into every facet of his predicament with such detail. I felt like I was in the room with him at every turn. So so so impressive. Although, I'm confused as to why everyone is asking for a Chapter 6. You clearly ended it on the perfect note, loose ends tied up nicely, with hope for the future dangling in the air. I loved every line. BRAVO!

~ GreenRoots

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