All Comments on 'Getting Sweaty with Daddy'

nice story but you mixed up the names, sarah became emily

This was a great story. One issue that was bit distracting was that you kept referring to Emily instead of Sarah. You did it more than once throughout the story.

Thank you for pointing that out. I don’t know how that slipped by me. Does anyone know if there is a way to rectify that?

Thank you for the heads up about the names. I resubmitted the story with the names corrected. I apologize for the confusion. I will be more careful in the future.

Very, very steamy!

I'd love to hear that other story. In order to please Daddy, she needs to learn to eat pussy, namely Sarah's. Then maybe anyone else he suggests. 5/5

very erotic. would love to read the next part

Liked it up to the very last 2 sentences. Then I knew I wouldn't read another chapter if there was one. Other than that it was pretty darn good. It could have used a tad more description of them and the sex.

That was hot! Thank you.

Great fun.

Likeable couple, hope you continue their story.

Great story. Loved the slow build up and desire. Can’t wait to hear about the unholy threesome!

Great story, now on to the next installment.

Just no. The seeing Sarah still isn't necessary. In fact makes the relationship feel less important, 1 star.

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Read this before going to church 😈 Love the build up & the back story. Always enjoy the events & moments leading up to the “ Climax “. Liked how the “ slutty daughter “ got dad into the shower. And the dirty talk on the bed. Looking forward to the next chapter with Sarah.