by Dilandau
It looks like I myself have fallen in love with Jessica) We need a continuation!!!
This was an excellent story and plot line. Please continue with another sequel or two.
One big buildup , , , Wow! This deserves a sequel describing them ten years later. Just a thought.
Perhaps the very best story I have read. The tempo was superb and the reactions seemed plausible instead of the often contrived feeling.
So good. I'm not a big boob fan. But who can resist her personality? She's a doll.
THANKS
I love big boobs, but haven't fantasized about them anywhere near this big. Maybe that's just because I haven't seen stories this good.
The thing is, Jessica's just so darned matter-of-fact about them! That's one of the things (not the only one) that makes her so charming.
Then comes the last-page kicker about how in love she is with her breasts, and how thrilled she is that they'll keep growing. Up till that point I'd been alternating between arousal and pity - but clearly she has no need for the latter.
I'm not so sure this needs a sequel -- but I'd *love* to see other stories in the same vein.
Thank you.
P.S. Jessica's TV-remote comeon? Man, that happened to me once. I needed it too; I was just as clueless as him. They were only standard-issue B-cups (the object of the treasure hunt was also a lot smaller), but they were also about to be the second woman's breasts I'd ever got to play with -- so a pretty big f'n deal!
I think it would be interesting to read the story from Jessica's perspective.
This is a great story. It deserves more chapters. Continuing with college, meeting roommates, meeting both families, etc. Would be great!
Would love to read a follow up. Getting to Know Him. Show her work out routine. Her mother was a wonder woman fan and had a custom costume made with lasso she out grew. Father was rodeo cowboy when younger and taught Jessica how to lasso. Brother was a wrestler and wrestled with Jessica until she and stronger and was able to pin him. She doesn't realize her hidden strength and wrestles, pins Eric and smothers. Eric doesn't realize he likes to be dominated and smothered. Gratuitous spanking and sexy work out languire
One of the best stories I've run into on Literotica over a dozen years. Very nicely done. I just wish you had written more since four years back.
Holy crap! Just wonderful, satisfying, sweet, and lovely and funny!
GREAT Story! Love it! Plot and stile outstanding!
Please continue this amazing story!
Sexy, funny and romantic. With hot sex mixed in without being over the top.
A very delicious story, that makes me wish I were him.
The most ridiculous story I've ever read. In a good way... I loved it!
Wholesome and funny with a good about of dorky romance and actual romance.
Loved it! Well written and the romance part really kept the whole thing together!
I have never felt so envious of a fictional character before in my life, but damn I wish I could be him.
You've written a superb story--worth at least ten stars. Didn't he go to her house to work on their computer science assignment? Seems to me her boobs got in the way--a lot. But what a way to go!
This is exactly my kind of fantasy and the story is just perfect down to the last detail.
That was one of the best stories I've read on this site . It was entertaining, exciting, and sensual. I came numerous times while reading it. Hope you write something similar in the near future. Thanks.
"The kiss lasted forever. Civilizations rose and fell outside Jessica's house while their lips were locked together. Wars were fought, species went extinct, galaxies died and new ones were born, all in the space of that single kiss which was now the only thing that mattered in the universe. He'd never experienced anything like it before."
I had to put down my phone and take a moment as I was laughing so hard from that passage. Good job, mate.
This story is so sexy and addictive there has to be a sequel. Thanks so much xx
My thanks for a 'gripping read'. The characters are realistic and the story plays well to our wishes. I like a longer story. I echo the other comments to encourage the author. R
That was phenomenal, so well written. Great job please keep the story going.
Definitely needs two sequels. One meeting parents and marrying, and another several years later
I read your story in awe..I was amazed at how well written it was and like I was almost there...Please keep writing and maybe a sequeal can be put into the works...I would love to see that and read it
It is really tough to find good storyteller inside of the bounds of our fetish. And it is much tougher to find one who can narrate what he sees in his imagination in such detail and precision. If you take into account, that pretty much of those who write BB stories, like them much smaller then I do, and I read such stories not so often, then you can calculate, that for me luck of finding such story as this one, was almost unbelievable. :-)
Thank you for great experience!
Good story. There are so many paths to go...Erik and Jessica go on Spring Break and go to the beach ("Beach Baby" could be a good title for this; yes, I am fan of that song), meeting the parents, et. al.
Waiting for more...
Your writing is so well thought out and the characters are so endearing and relatable. It doesn't just have to be about the sex ( even though that was awesome too). I really hope you make a part 2 to this. I just want more of these characters. Jessica is so cute and fun, and seeing Erik's growth as a man was great. Please write more. You have a gift.
Or I'd fear very much for Erik's health, life, and soul...Seriously, though, this is a good story, and I'd like to see a sequel...
I'm a lesbian so I don't really get into B/G scenes like that but I can kind of relate to Jessica and she's reminds me of me in the sense that because we know what life as extremely well-endowed women is like.
I'm also fortunate to have someone in my life who loves my boobs like Erik does and THAT is a turn on. I wrote about it in the last story I've ever written. It's been hard to write stories though I might go back to it one day.
Anyway, you did a great job because it's hard to write good stories and people will critique you harshly and they aren't willing to step out and write stories themselves. So good for you.
This story is simply amazing. Great character development. Jessica is more than just a two dimensional person. She seems so real, approachable, and inviting. She deserves a series. This story has been placed in my top 5 most erotic literary pieces of all time.
Great story idea. I really enjoyed the writing style. Please write a sequel.
Could you please remove the breast expansion tag. There was no actual expansion in this story
I have to concur. This was an amazing story, and the genuine affection between the two leads felt well developed and the inevitable sex well earned. Would love to see similar stories to this, or even find out what happened after as others have said.
Either way, keep up the great writing!
One of the better huge bust story, just on the edge of believability. If you're considering a sequel, I'd like to explore what would happen if they had a child and she lactated. Would her milk production be in proportion to the rest of her breast parts? Some women can spray milk around. What would Jessica's milk spray look like?
I'd love more of this style. The constant building, how both are into it and feed off each other, I love it.
Amazing story!!!! Full of pasion and love, not only sex!!!! I have hope, that you write a next chapters!!!!!
This story was absolutely amazing. I never thought I'd find a story like this. It was hot sexy beautiful. I only thought I'd find giant tit erotica but this was a romance about huge tits. I wish there was a short epilogue for it. Like obviously they spent the rest of their lifes together but just to see it in writing would be perfect.
Beautifully written! It's hard to find a true romance on this site. It's usually all about the sex. I'm a huge fan of enormous proportions and breast expansion, but what really gets me about this story is the focus. Jessica has medicine ball-sized boobs, but it's more about her, Erik, and the boy-meets-girl event they have. The romance was beautiful, and I love that it wasn't all about sex only. It was surprisingly tasteful for having such huge breasts. Most stories about oversized tits are so trashy, this was a breath of fresh air that had me fingering my pussy like mad! I don't want to be one of THOSE readers, but if you have any further adventures planned for Erik and Jessica (meeting her roommates, meeting her brother and his girlfriend, meeting her parents, having kids of their own), well... I sure wouldn't complain. ^//////^
I feel it kind of moved too fast. Then again this is already eight pages long so maybe that's relative.
What a fantastic story! Thank you so much for something so lovely, a great little romance, and wonderful, massive boobs!
This was fantastic! One of my favorite stories I've read. I hope to see a part 2 in the future or a story similar to this.
Wonderful storytelling. Completely out of my zone but I didn't want to stop reading. Character depth was enjoyable as was the ebb and flow of the budding romance. Well done.
Another thoroughly enjoyable read, thank you so very much for sharing it with us. Don't let any nay-sayers get to you, the amount of exposition you provided was entirely appropriate. I hope you continue to share your works with us in the future.
and massive tit-flesh! I'm all for stories with great exposition, characters, and way over the top proportions! You sure delivered!