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by Elaine_Mature

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u4 months ago

Elaine, there are a lot of elements in this story. All showcased by the talent you have in crafting a wonderful tale of daring, lust and discovery. Art doesn't always have to hang in a gallery. Cheers, Andy

Lumiere_AmieLumiere_Amie4 months ago

Well written! I enjoyed how the short, clipped paragraphs helped communicate the tension of the entire story. With slight changes to the characters, this could be anything: Interracial, First Time, Incest, Gay Male, or even Romance. Twist the characters just a bit and the story still stands. Bravo!

Oh, and I don't read many Lesbian stories but you may have just converted me. 😉

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what to call it, but it features three young women catching a ride with a farm boy, headed for the big c...