All Comments on 'Ghost in the Darkness'

Thank you. I enjoyed both your writing skills and the actual storyline. Interesting. Anyway, thanks again. Cheers.

Thank you for reading LenardSpencer and for the feedback.

WOW!!! THANK YOU for a fun read.

Beautifully written, and thoroughly enjoyable

Beautifully written, and thoroughly enjoyable

Maybe I missed something. He bathed her but didn’t know about her disfigurement until the last night?

My pleasure!

Good story!

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Very original and well done. 5/5, really enjoyed it. Hoping for a romance to develop gien the incredible empathy you have so skillfully developed. Thanks for this one!

Hi B_E, Yes, definitely Thank You. This is one of the most original stories I've read on L.c. The pace of the build-up was excellent, the sex was sexy, the writing was very, very good.. You definitely picked the Romance category correctly: though the business was sexual, this guy was in love.

I really do appreciate the feedback everyone. And whilst I know it's not perfect in places, the main thing I was trying to put across was the human element; the needs, the wants, the variability and evolution of us as individuals. How we sometimes even surprise ourselves.

As for the point made about the bathing and him not realising her disfigurement, I did think about this before publishing, so it s perhaps not strictly an error as such. As I edited, I wondered if it might be possible that he would miss it. He is nervous of this area - near the face. It's off limits. He could be using a sponge or flannel. It is dark. His senses and mind would be in a million places at once. So rather than change it, I let it go. Because in life sometimes we do miss things. And remember - he has no idea for one moment what she is hiding. No reason to suspect.

Thank you everyone

Lady Sheba

My only disappointment is that the story didn’t continue. Such deep emotion in silence is breathtaking.

This is part of a series I'm creating - Perfect Imperfections. The second installment will hopefully be readable here in a few days. It's a very different story from the previous but the theme remains. I hope you enjoy it. You will need kleenex.

My words mean very little in the world. But with that said, this is a tremendously well done story.