All Comments on 'Ghostly Chains'

Different and well-written. I haven't read much erotica with supernatural elements and wasn't sure how I'd react to it, but you handled it very well.

Wonderful adventure. i have had fantasies exactly like what was described. Very HOT!!!

<p>Inside its supernatural setting, this vignette takes a vivid snapshot of an episode of public orgasm control.</p>

<p>Insightful description of the submissive's feelings, especially heightened ecstasy as a result of delayed orgasm.</p>

<p>The use of second person distanced me from the story somewhat; I think it would be much more powerful written in first or third person.</p>