All Comments on 'Ghosts Ch. 07'

by zombiegirl28

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent

I like this story a lot better than most vampire stories. Just wondering, if she got free, how would she get a job in her current mental condition? Great development of Lex, and its great having Jack in a big role. Please keep going!

grrlslavegrrlslaveabout 10 years ago
Excellent

This is one of the best stories I've ever read here. I can say without hesitation, I would pay for your work. Thank you for sharing it. ...umm... more please :)

Noble_TruthNoble_Truthabout 10 years ago
Good so far.

This story is filled to the brim with delicious psychological intrigue. I do believe I'm hooked.

NT

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 10 years ago
Expectations

This story is amazing. If people were surprised by the last chapter they haven't been reading the same story.

We will follow your yellow brick road, Wizard. Show us what is behind the curtain,

kris10ekris10eabout 10 years ago
Ahhhhhh.....

I hate to bug, but I got so use to have quick chapters from you that I guess I'm getting pretty desperate and would love to find out what happens next. This story has the right everything to it. I love his ruthlessness, passion, and mystery and she has a submissive spun about her too. She a survivor and anyone can appreciate that, even if she's and junkie. I like this story for two main reasons, one ...you have created something different. A world of your own. And two... it's not perfect and pretty. It's a little scary and I love that. So I do hope you continue and always expect a comment from me...you are now one of my favs. Good luck and Thank you all in one! Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Favorite type of story

I love stories like this. It's not all about the wam bam thank you ma'am and it has my favorite type of characters personality. I love how be is kinda twisted but also caring. Interested to read the rest :)

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